Club Of The Waves
cotw wrote:The 5th story is now online! This story is called "Giving Slaps".
www.clubofthewaves.com/surf_culture_beach_fights.php#five
Though the stories bother me, I am glad you are writing them. I think that this series is a wonderful way to incorporate real life experience with art and then get the community to interact - it's extremely clever. I'm impressed!
Do any of these have a happy ending? It makes me sad to learn that there is such violence and uncaring in the world. Damn! These people should be ashamed of themselves!
This is one of the reasons I don't really like to go to Hawaii anymore - there's too much of this stuff happening. And even though it doesn't happen to me, I don't want to be around people who do it.
Thanks for sharing!
Ronnie boy
These are really fun.
I especially like the Flying Bike painting and Topanga Anger.
You got the colors of Topanga just right.
The slap story was the funniest so far.
I can just see those guys in the parking lot going at it, then next day business as usual.
I liked the ending too where the girl dumps both of them and goes off with a bronzed Aussie.
Keep it up.
Some harrowing, nasty stories there!
I hate that shit.
Hey, sucka - it's wanders inn! What'sa mata u, fooll dog idiot! Shoreview sump bum rat! No class clown lump brain stooge! Good luck, why don't u move to l a, so u can fit in with thoz chumps! Yeah, & don't come bk! ever! See yah, bunch of stomp ass storys that don't stomp! Worthless piece of crap! I've had it w u! 10 4, joke! Go hang w seals & get shark bit! Do something w yor life, feed the environ w ur blood! Before i do! Had the course w rip off raps! Join the crowds at the beach & get boiled by the sun, lobster head! Tired of ur sorry ass anyway! Fin, we're thru! Lotsa luck, loser! see ya!
I read em Ron....
Didn't really enjoy them as you can imagine why... I got beat up at S Mission by some gang members. Not a good day... and the other fights I witnessed have always made me sick to watch. Such bullies and big baby's. Blowhards and cowards mostly....
But your writing is great and the story board illustrations rock.
Do any of these have a happy ending? It makes me sad to learn that there is such violence and uncaring in the world. Damn! These people should be ashamed of themselves!
This is one of the reasons I don't really like to go to Hawaii anymore - there's too much of this stuff happening. And even though it doesn't happen to me, I don't want to be around people who do it.
Thanks for sharing!
McKibben Studios wrote:Attitude Adjustment Required
Ron,
I have been reading your stories. One of my favorite sentences is: "These were the days before Ano was a park, before sharks and before the sea elephants returned. Just a wild, wonderful, wind swept and grassy farmland."
For what it's worth these are my insights:
You know your subject matter. That's a good thing. I think when surfers read these stories, they are going to connect to you.
Unfortunately, I don't surf so I don't understand the characters' motivation, or the waves, or the the whole scene. I need more details. But when I click on your paintings. WOW! I understand. The illustrations make the stories come alive. The picture of the Flying Bicycle is a real eye catcher. (I may use with my class) The story makes it all the more appealing.
I think the difference between your art and your writing is that your art is personal. Your emotions show through. When you write you are objective, almost like a reporter. I enjoyed seeing the two together.
P.S.
The surfer's world is intriguing.
You should continue to write about it.
Mary

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